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Gmod: Snowing day by CommanderJackshit Gmod: Snowing day by CommanderJackshit
Happy late birthday to ~LucyXul-Doom <333

This isn't really a birthday pic, but since i didn't have a good idea and i featured her, i thought it would count...

So... (spanish moment)

Feliz cumpleaņos!, ojala la hayas pasado/la pases bien <333
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This scene has a great use of lighting, enough for some good looking shadows but not too much so it would appear to be lit naturally.
I like that you've used two easily contrastable characters that can be matched by their gear (They both have a plushie type misc item, both have a Santa hat) which was quite clever.
I love the way you've set out the scene with the characters in the foreground, the pile of presents setting more of a holiday mood in the background, and you did a great job of not cluttering up the scene by having everything positioned that way.
The only negative thing I'd point out is that the Fem-Scout's smile looks a bit... off. I know that sometimes it's hard to find the right facial 'muscles' in a model to get the expression you want, but It feels like it could've had a little work.

Overall, it's a really nice moment posed relatively well with some excellent scenery. I always liked the simple approach where only what's necessary is in the shot and not too much of the regular map is shown.

P.S, this is my first Critique: I have no idea what I'm doing. Please don't kill me!

P.P.S, I've never seen that model of the Fem-Scout, or the BLU skin of the Santa hat. Nice!
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:iconilovescout9453:
ilovescout9453 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
Bieno! Bieno!
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:iconweegeetnik:
Weegeetnik Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What's that character on right ?
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:iconcommanderjackshit:
CommanderJackshit Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
My girlfriend representation in gmod.
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:iconweegeetnik:
Weegeetnik Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, but where can I get the model ?
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:iconcommanderjackshit:
CommanderJackshit Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I don't have the link now, sorry :S
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:iconweegeetnik:
Weegeetnik Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, piss !
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:iconcrazyk1ller:
CrazyK1ller Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
And here's my question... Where is the falling snow? Huh, because without a falling snow it's not a winter, ohh hell no!
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:iconcommanderjackshit:
CommanderJackshit Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, i suck at doin effects..
i think i can try making some now.
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:iconcrazyk1ller:
CrazyK1ller Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Wanna have a lesson? Just sayin'
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:iconcommanderjackshit:
CommanderJackshit Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Umm okay, where?
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